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©2008-2009 =mark-flammable
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The cover for the Flammable brochure - design inspired by theuncrative: [link] and his strength in numbers packaging: [link]
Thanks to him for the idea.
The cover shows the companies targets... skiers, snowboarders, new zealanders and graff artists!

NB: guitarist is playing a map of New Zealand! look here to see what NZ looks like: [link]

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:iconpowlomad100:
subtle spray around the paint can is good, but could be emphasised a bit more to bring it out. maybe try to incorporate the spray into the '08' in the title. but 3 great colours, very much relevant to the target audience i feel. good stuff.

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Are you talking about what the guy is spraying or around the group of spray cans on the "floor"?
I like the idea of him spraying a big 08! it would be 09 now as the company has been on hold for a year and no selling got done last November!
Thanks for your comments tho!

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:iconpowlomad100:
talking about what the guy is spraying. nice splatter effect going on, could just make it a bit more noticeable?
if any of these ideas get used i expect a cut in the profits haha. joking of course! keep it up mate

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If i go crazy will you still call me Superman?
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Oh of course!!! Definitely joking! I really wana give that 08 being sprayed by the guy idea a go, will have to change the font down the bottom... it bothers me! Any Ideas

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:iconpowlomad100:
ignore the other comment. rubbish internet connection :P
er it'd be quite nice to see some sort of flame/smoke coming off the flammable and maybe dry ice kind of effect on the winter, but make sure that it's pretty clean cut looking. then for the 08, do like a spray stencil kind of thing, but have it overlapping the winter text so it's looking all rough and ready. dunno if that makes sense...

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yeah I like the stencil 08 idea, I just wanted to keep the flammable_winter a bit more simple than that... no offence but I also think if I added smoke and ice, it would seem a bit cheesy to the shop buyers... I want to get a serious feel from this. I do want to change the font tho... any suggestions!

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